Hot and Sexy though pretty unlikely *****
I know it's fiction! Yes, I know. Just sayin...

But, how many 18 year olds have I met who would act this way? NONE OK, that being said it was funny, sexy, and a great read. I have my own babysitter story with a few parallels.

Kathy is obviously having an affair herself unless she has emotional problems as well. There is no other explanation for her behavior.

Also, agree with comments about big tits and mentioning it over and over. It's distracting and just not necessary. Besides, tiny tits are terrific. Anything more than a handful is just extra fat. "A Bra is just a Fashion Accessory"

Great!
I really liked the story! Bits of realism, mixed with some lovely fantasy and playful babysitter equals to a great experience AND warm feeling at the end, something I rarely get from reading any story. Thank you for providing that experience.

One small thing, though - I don't think this story belongs in non-consensual category. Romance would probably suit it better. Just my opinion.

My favorite part are the comments. People read free erotic fiction then gripe because it's unrealistic... Good story. It is as realistic as the Pretty Woman movie which made millions. Strange how when the guy comes out better on the end it's unrealistic....

Nice story wrong category
I liked the story. I think the sister part was a little rushed, either she’s all in or all out, but if she was furious she accepted way to quick. However, there is no nonconsent or reluctance in the story.

I liked the ending (I know I'm the only one)
The ending was good because it let the story remain a fantasy. In the real world, divorce court would destroy John. Rachel isn't a virgin and would be portrayed as a slut who he slept with. Men lose in divorce even when they are innocent. In this case, John is the actual cheater. He would lose the house but also his life savings AND THE KIDS. His wife may be a bitch, but the story really didn't give any indication that she was a bad mother or disliked them other than John saying it. She would get the kids plus large child support payments. If she is the bitch others seem to think, she would take the kids just to milk John for the child support. Actually there is no indication that John has any relationship with his kids - let alone a better one than his wife. Rachel's parents would go ballistic, and Rachel would be in the middle. Not good for the long term of hers and John's future marriage. A few others have noted that Rachel is very domineering to John - though in a sweet way. Will the sweetness continue when most of the money is going to the ex, Kathy? Finally, it might be fun for Rachel to play house for a few hours or days with John's kids and get her lights fucked out, but will she stay sweet when the chores become day to day and non-stop. Also, we know Rachel loves sex so will she find it elsewhere in the future. A young woman who has no qualms about fucking another woman's husband - especially one that isn't coming on to her - isn't likely to care about limiting her own sexual impulses to HER own marital bed.

The busty baby sitter
An excellent story. There needs to be a part one, two three and more. A very well constructed story with so much potential. I implore you to be writing some more parts to this, please.

Good job
I really loved the story and I really mean it.

So Good But Much Too Short
I would love to see a sequel. The young babysitter seems like the perfect women, busty, affectionate and supportive. How could the dad character not fall for her.

cool
wow! mighty cool. and yes, life can be that simple Really liked it. sweet babysitter, guy who finally put his pants on and best of all, children who finally got a full time mother who loved them Jack

Needs a few more chapters, please
Kathy clearly is a POS. She thinks of nobody but herself. It would be interesting to find out what happens with the kids and if Kathy was running around, and if she got what's coming to her...

Still a great story!
This is my second or third time stumbling upon this story, and it’s still a great read. It does beg for more chapters, but overall I loved the buildup. It also reminds me of my past fantasies over a very busty babysitter we had a few decades ago, man was she ever hot! She also liked to flirt with me too. Never took her up on it, but damn she was good fantasy material for sure.

The ending ...
In order to accept his statement that Kathy doesn't even like her kids ... just show me. Without seeing her treating the kids badly, or very clearly putting her own selfish wants above them, I can't quite imagine it. Here's an easy one - the kids missed her, and she wasn't even bothering to call to say goodnight to them.

The icing on that would be if he had innocently found out that Kathy's sister's surgery was a lie, and she was off fucking some asshole she found on the 'net.

Stories are always so much better if your readers get to know the characters, and care what they do.